Begining Or End? ? Poem by maria rahman

Begining Or End? ?



Few dry leaves were lying there…
And an ugly looking ivy was burning down…
In flames was the cosmos of my past…..
Charred it crumbled down.

Before I knew..
It was raining.
There was no rainbow in the sky,
Coz rainbows are rare in reality.

But there was this muddy smell in the air..
The smell of BEGINNING! ! ! !
Maybe..
The smell of growing up! !
Maybe…
The smell of BEING ALIVE! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 06 September 2008

The concluding line are beautiful that make a nice sense. Wel done Maria.

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Anna jonson 06 September 2008

what a poem.. good job maria

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A waft of fresh lime signs that life goes on come whatever may Shabash! ! ! Rehan

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David Murphy 02 May 2008

NICE- the smell of being alive

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