Dance Partners As Things In The Wind (Blank Verse Sonnet) Poem by R. H. Peat

Dance Partners As Things In The Wind (Blank Verse Sonnet)



Your spirit holds me near in lift and fall
it takes my breath away with each embrace;
In laughing wind and graceful sky we dance
and I'm a clumsy bear within the fog.
You set your toes so softly down on tiles,
you're like a gentle fawn that walks in snow.
In effortless dance you track, uplift and map
the orbit placed on moon or stars as deep
in velvet space: you follow, trace the grace
that's held in ceaseless movement; while I
am caught within my struggled steps amid
the fray of motion's spin, my tumbling feet
announce their fall inside mistaken range
of pace where quest collides with pulsing heart.

Notes:
© Ron peat/ 1/30/04 — 2: 30
Form: blank verse sonnet/ 14 metric lines,
Volta: Line - 10 — Iambic Petameter.
Published: Abyss of the moon Page 45
Xlibris Corporation 2010

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes: © Ron peat/ 1/30/04 — 2: 30 Form: blank verse sonnet/ 14 metric lines, Volta: Line - 10 — Iambic Petameter.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
RH Peat 28 July 2022

I'm glad you like the poem Belle. It was written for my wife. Do you write in meter. If you do point me to your Metric verses or even syllabic.

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Belle Wassermeister 27 July 2022

Excellent sonnet, R. H. Thanks for posting.

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R. H. Peat 30 July 2022

The poem holds its sonnet appearance (short song quality) through the Iambic pentameter.

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