Damaged Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Damaged

Rating: 5.0


this reflection so full of hurt
cracking its beginning to crumble
breaking into many damaged pieces
like glass that's been shattered
these sharp shards left laying
into my heart they do sink
so with every agonizing beat
they slice deeper within
a constant, torturous reminder
of how i'm painfully broken again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cosmic Dreamer 02 November 2011

You just keep getting better... Such a descriptive powerful poem... Your words came to life and I felt them... Excellent poem...

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Jacqui Broad 03 November 2011

Wow, a shattering piece...broken mirror/broken heart. It still cuts like a knife...

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Kara Towe 07 January 2012

Great write. I (unfortunately) can so relate to this. Thank you for sharing, We're not alone.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 31 December 2011

Never let pain suffocate you, great poem.

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Ency Bearis 09 November 2011

A great simile poem, pain can cause damage emotionally, well versed thought.

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Faustina Marie 08 November 2011

Amazing emotion, I've yet to have my heart broken but I think I know what it feels like now...

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Saadat Tahir 03 November 2011

these sharp shards left laying into my heart they do sink so with every agonizing beat painful and deeply felt nice poetry

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