Crying In My Sleep Poem by Shaikyu Yun

Crying In My Sleep

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Today i greeted the sky
with such heavy eyes
though hard i tried
i know that i couldn't lie
that i was crying
last night before i fell asleep
and then it was raining
and loneliness quietly slip
outside and wet the soil
and i dreamt a beautiful dream
that embraced me into a coil
though before i wanted to scream
now i feel like heaven look down on me
telling me everything will be fine
and tomorrow you'll surely find
a reason to smile again
though it will start faint.
but it would as clear as the rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
fleur de lys 03 May 2010

Perfect description of a benevolent presence that looks down on us all. I could sense the comfort and love of such beautiful moments.

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beautifully penned.. like the way you set the words. keep writing..would love to read more of you - M.S.

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