Crying Poem by Innocent Once

Crying

Rating: 5.0


I'm crying but you can't see
Because who you see isn't really me.
I'm crying as i smile too.
But you don't realise
Because my feelings are hidden,
Deep down inside.
Yes.
I'm crying inside
And smiling on the out
Noboby's going to realise

I'm crying

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
anonymous 21 March 2008

awwww...thats really sad i hope you're ok i've cried like that before, crying in the inside and smiling in the outside pretending everything is fine, when it's not well anyways good job and keep writing =] ***anonynous***

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poem whore 21 March 2008

Y U should not hold it on the inside who cares if some one see's you care maybe it well help to have another set of tear at your side

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