Cry For You (From My Mind) Poem by Mr. Cheese

Cry For You (From My Mind)

Rating: 3.7


So picture perfect
But in motion things become blurry
I would cry if the world would stop for me
Just for that one moment to see the why, and why not

How can I tell her about these visions
When she can't see the romance in my mind
The more I wonder the more it confuses me
Or am I just really not understanding

So many things I want to tell her
Dreams, Secrets, Thoughts, Ideas
She has no idea what she does to me
She has no idea how beautiful she really is

I watch flowers blossom when I stare into her eyes
So angel like and delicate yet so fierce
All the physical power in my beings
Useless against her strength imprisoning my heart

Maybe one day she'll crash land in my mind
And through all the debris see the passion
If that's the case
I'd be up to buy her that plane with the defected wing

If I could just, just reach her
I could love her
And from there forever I would be happy
Since after all, the rest of forever would be with her


'08/02/2009'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 02 August 2009

''I watch flowers blossom when I stare into her eyes So angel like and delicate yet so fierce All the physical power in my beings Useless against her strength imprisoning my heart'' nice combination between simile and visual, cognitive metaphor, wonderful feelings....lovely to read......10

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