Cruel Poem by Pondering Portrait

Cruel

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Why can’t you look at me?
Why can’t you see?
These tears that glisten
So shamelessly

The ones you brought out
With every cruel word
That tore into me
With my pride so hurt

Why don’t you care
What made you so cold
Trampling over me
And spitting at my soul

Selfish with your greed
And injustice done to you
Blind to pain you’ve inflicted
To those who it isn’t due.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Gomez 04 October 2009

Excellent! you're beginning to incorporate rhyming into your poems! An bold step into a new direction with limitless horizons.

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Stephan Mclean 27 September 2009

Really good write...I like your poems! !

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