Critter Cookies Poem by Bill Grace

Critter Cookies

Rating: 5.0


The critter came and stole my cookies
The evidence of bag was left behind
A matter of no little spine
Given the closeness to the house
My fear is even greater
When I think it was a mouse.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 20 April 2011

Yes, gun can not be used to keep the mouse away. It steals sometimes heart of the house-owner but silently without keeping any marks of stealing.... Better the caption could be...'BEWARE OF RATS'. Nice poem with strong metaphore. Regards, Pranab k chakraborty 10++(if it servers the server)

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