Criticism Poem by Luwi Habte

Criticism

Rating: 3.6


The truth is half and reversal half
the futile and useless stuff
which pulls man on defensive
and makes him justify him self to strive

the dangerous action
it wounds man`s precious station
and hurts sense of importance
also arouses his resentment face

criticism is dangerous spark
which causes an explosion, pride killer`s park
never to be accepted
hence the creator will be hated

God him self sir does not propose to judge a man until the end of his days so why should we, you and I?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 16 June 2009

'crisitism is dangerous spark which causes an explosion, pride killer`s park never to be accepted hence the creator will be hated' Beautiful poem with nice ending. I love the idea.10+++

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Tom Golding 23 June 2009

A good subject which needs more work on the spelling and grammer. Do you mean 'Criticism'? ie Pertaining to censure. A worthy subject.

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Indira Renganathan 26 June 2009

Thought prvoking whether to accept criticism or not....good thinking

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 14 October 2009

This is an outstanding write

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 06 September 2009

An ‘even’ mind can only accept criticism and praise in similar way. Poet has enumerated nicely the dark zones of not accepting criticism as morale. Thanks for stirring my grey cells. Ten+ dr. sakti

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criticism is dangerous spark which causes an explosion, pride killer`s park never to be accepted hence the creator will be hated no resentment and self criticism is best one. it gives u solace from your own action.. best write dear..i admire it....10 read mine friend in mirror.. i am disgrace and individual an stupidity

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Roland Bastien 22 July 2009

you hit the point in an accurate manner - I like the end- I give you...8

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Saadat Tahir 15 July 2009

Yes luwi... I wholeheartedly support ur contention.. Messy folks should just go about their life.... and let people be but unfortunately...this world with its increasingly...filled in...dimensions and entropy....wo0nt let u be ur anger and exaspiration moves swift through tyhe lines.. very welll written cheers

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