Coupledom Poem by Karen Touzalin

Coupledom

Rating: 5.0


I want to revoke my state of independence
I want to go back to coupledom and live with you,
conjoined
in connubial bliss.
I want you to finish my sentences
and laugh at my silliness when no one else will.
I want to be alone, but only with you.
I want to revoke my state of independence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annabel Cruz 13 February 2011

love the honest simplicity of this one! There's also an understated humor which is very appealing and sweet.

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Matt Mooney 23 January 2011

How could one do better than this with a thought like that? It's the sweetest of poetry stating your case so honestly and beautifully.10.

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Amy Cullinane 15 June 2010

I like this, straight and simple.

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Karen Touzalin

Karen Touzalin

Kingston, Jamaica
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