Counting Poem by Saint Cynosure

Counting

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We breath by seconds,
move by minutes,
and live our lives by hours.
We count our days in squares of paper,
that we often hang on our walls.
Sorted by 30's spread by the 12's,
and celebrate when the last of them falls.
All of this cause we can count...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 21 October 2008

I hav a poem like this ish but called Time anyway very cool poem always Becca

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Kesav Easwaran 30 August 2008

a count down poem...or a count up one? either way it could be...clever intelligent write...ten for the brilliant idea behind this poem

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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 August 2008

you are born to be a great poet. keep on.

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