Contemplation Poem by Tobias Gray

Contemplation

Rating: 5.0


As you sit in the dark
And contemplate your death
You ask yourself, “Why? ”

The answer is because your weak.
The weak die.
The strong survive.

The weak get in the way
The strong go on their way
That is the answer
To the question, “Why? ”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evaughn Gray 02 August 2007

this is a very good poem...i really liked this one, i give it a ten ~hazel

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Anabel just Anabel 08 October 2009

mmm it's true if you think about it! nice job! : D

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Young One 17 September 2009

you sound like a Sparton king, this is true though, the weak do get in the way, but if it were not for the weak, the strong could not exist.

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Tamara - Hanaring 17 September 2009

a beautiful question and answer..well said

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Serenity Prayer 25 June 2008

never thought of it that way before...hm.....interesting. good job. very well written.

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Aaron Tate 22 April 2008

Without the weak non could be considered strong.

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