Confession Of A Child Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Confession Of A Child

Rating: 5.0


If the world is not made for this smile
It's just an accident injurious and futile.
Or it's a bye-product thrown in the space
But this innocent face, its glace, its grace
Thanks giving for a surprise victory in a game
Confessing with smile and with a little shame
Attractive, heart catching an excuse though lame
In that to win the match dishonest she became
I do not see His face but I listen to His voice
I call Him Dear God, it's my personal choice
Overlooking her confession and congratulating
Forces me to believe I had been under rating
The world where there's beautiful smile of a child
May be a little naughty but cute and mild
Can neither be a bye product nor an accident
It's man made, I'm sure, if there's a dent.

Confession Of A Child
Sunday, April 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: smile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 29 April 2018

To confess and to overcome. Seeing the ways of the world. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 May 2018

MAY BE SIR I AM ALSO THAT ONE YOUR POETIC CHILD Shukriya aapne quadar toe kee iss simple saaade poet kee.. Your pen is mightier THAN ANY sword BORN OUT OF A POETIC MIND I SALUTE YOU FOR BEING EVER so kind May in this world of A COMMON GOD YOU AKHTAR JANABH SIR FOR MILES IN TIME LIKE A GLISTENING Diamond for ever SHINE

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Loke Kok Yee 01 May 2018

I am overwhelm by the sweetness of the poem and that little girl. Thank you sir.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2018

A very heartwarming write that gives smile to one's heart. Liked the last two lines of the poem..A great piece.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 April 2018

Dear beloved poet Akhtar.. i have absolutely no objection, i like you. you are a sincere poet. Or it's a bye-product thrown in the space But this innocent face, its glace, its grace. very fine thoughts dear Akhtar, thank u very much. tony

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Hazel Durham 29 April 2018

Stunning write with beautiful imagery and thanks for sharing!

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