Confession, Confusion! Poem by Azhar Ibrahim

Confession, Confusion!

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A rock,
It broke.
A stream,
It flowed.
The course,
It stood.

Confused.
Asked.

Should I scream,
Let the valley know,
The sacred secret!

Or should I dry,
Leaving no trace,
Of existence!

Friday, August 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: confessional,confusion,heart,love,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 August 2018

Should I scream, Let the valley know, The sacred secret! ..existence, rock, that splits, so powerful. symbol of life and permanence and at the same time destruction..... the mystery, the secret....... thank u dear poet for your creative thinking. tony

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Naila Rais 25 August 2018

Really awesome..... Great. Keep it up.... You may like to read my poems too...10 Naila

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