Complimenting Poem by Mackenzie Scholte

Complimenting

Rating: 5.0


I lie here,
Cold and shaking
Uncertain,
About what's ahead,
For us
I'm scared of you
Yet I find you...
So intriguing
Your past is a fog,
Your future hazy,
So unlike me
We compliment each other
And it scares me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Nightingale 19 January 2008

You really allow the reader to feel are part of the poem. True feelings. This is good work.

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