Compassion Poem by rich soos

Compassion

Rating: 5.0


failure determined
my old pain magnificent
clouds breathe soft and cool

from Train of Love (2000)

Wednesday, November 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud,compassion,failure,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2016

Failures still give learning. Clouds breath so softly and cool mind tells about life. Very interesting poem this is.10

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 16 November 2016

Short and nice, thank you for sharing this piece.

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rich soos

rich soos

Passaic, NJ USA
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