The Clock Poem by rich soos

The Clock

Rating: 5.0


never thinks to stop
it measures our hearts our dreams
and laughs at the wind

from California Breeze (1998)

The Clock
Monday, November 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,heart,laughter,time,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2016

Interesting write. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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R Soos 14 November 2016

I appreciate your note - thank you!

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Britte Ninad 22 May 2018

clock counts step of vein Teaches to take breath in well Live in punctual

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Seamus O Brian 19 November 2016

What a thoughtful insight into the nature of time in our life. A well crafted mechanism, this piece of writing. Well done!

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Marieta Maglas 17 November 2016

never thinks to stop - an excellent poem.10

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Mj Lemon 17 November 2016

That clock may be laughing because it knows things we don't. A very fine poem, Rich.

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R Soos 17 November 2016

thank you =: -) .

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2016

Never think to stop! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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R Soos 16 November 2016

Thanks =: -)

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rich soos

Passaic, NJ USA
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