Commitment Poem by Lora Colon

Commitment

Rating: 5.0


If I were that forceful gust of wind
That lifts feathers on the robin's breast,
High above the clouds I'd carry you,
To where Heaven flaunts its sacred crest - -
Far beyond Earth's perils and torments,
Where no angels glimpse a mortal guest

O, to be a swelling ocean wave!
I would sweep the shore, drinking you in,
Dragging you down to my very core,
Showing you places you've never been;
Sheltered we would be from peering eyes,
Lest they judge our love, calling it sin

But I'm just a woman who loves you,
No mystical powers do I command;
I can unburden your heart from pain,
Offering all the love that you demand;
And when the night exhales its cold breath,
There will be the warm clasp of my hand

Yes, I'm just a woman who loves you,
I can't transcend my humanity;
But I can illume your darkest hours,
Bringing you peace and serenity;
And if Divine mercy shall permit,
I'll walk with you through eternity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bipasha D 25 September 2020

Absolutely remarkable. The last two stanzas are sooooo beautiful. It's sad that poemhunter has removed the option to put favorite poems in poemlist. Full vote again.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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