Comfort Chats Poem by Aimee Brimson

Comfort Chats

Rating: 5.0


In home comforts... we all sit here
Chatting, giggling through the storm that's near.
Ignoring things which doesn't matter
At once it comes and drops it bomb
They still didn't care,
For they were all still very happy.
Now times ticking on... the storm still going
They're still chatting like the night is far
Overdue that long chat catch up with them all;
It will forever last,
Battering, battering the roof of this very loving house.

Monday, May 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: home
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
About a Grandma and her friends chatting - catching up with everything and everyone while the young teenage girl is in the background of this all. Talking about everything going on around her.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2016

lovely home and the joys of being together, ... pictured very well. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Aimee Brimson 03 June 2016

Thank you Tony very appreciated - means a lot. As a young poet of 15 I love to have feedback it helps to know what to keep doing and not do again as well as improving so thank you. Again very appreciated. Aomee

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