Cold Heart Poem by Melanie Vanderwerf

Cold Heart

Rating: 5.0


Clouds dark
Rain is here
Through the breeze
Feeling fear
Give me shade
Feed me light
Sweep the mud
Out of sight

Freezing cold
Skin is numb
Need some warmth
Can't be done
Snow will fall
Soft and sharp
Ice will smash
So has my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 May 2011

I love the way you wrote the poem. Deep and wise with Great imagery. Excellent write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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