Clouds: Tears Of Love Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Clouds: Tears Of Love

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And clouds seem to say,
Let tears of love flow,
There's no joy like a good spell.
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Haiku | 07.09.14 |

Sunday, June 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: joy,rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 June 2019

A poem of great depth and simplicity. Beautiful imagery.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 July 2019

A poem is a Brahmin, twice-born (dvija) : First when it is created, and then when appreciated. Thank you Rose Marie.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 June 2019

clouds the nature's floating elegiac heart!

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 June 2019

Beautiful comparison, Mahatb Bangalee. So feelingly elegiac, they shed tears for others, make them happy, and then feel happy themselves.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 June 2019

And clouds seem to say, Let tears of love flow.........fascinating poetic expression sir! A wonderful cute little poem..............10

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 June 2019

Thank you indeed Dr Swain, your feedback is valuable.

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Jane Campion 30 June 2019

A fine haiku, dear poet.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 June 2019

Your feedback is appreciated, Jane Campion.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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