Clouded Vision Poem by marie love

Clouded Vision



the skies were cloudy behind her eyes,
her life darkened without any light,
still she was alive with laughter,
it was love at first sight for me,
though she was blind.
i would try to brighten her day,
fragrant roses annonymously delivered,
let her know that she was loved
but she still stayed oblivious,
of her silent suitor.
i finally got up thye courage tot alkt o her,
she seemed amused but not delighted,
she was unaware of her beauty,
so she seemed to think
i was teasing her.
when i made my intentions clear,
her mood brightened
because she had never ha da boyfriend
but though she laughed easily
she never seen her own smile
so we spoke my words of love
she seemed taken back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sue Sie 26 March 2009

This is a lovely poem...romantic and caringly written...thanks for sharing your thoughts...10++

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Tiffany Fawcett 26 March 2009

Oh my god. You are a true romantic. It reminded me of Twilight. I REALLY love this. I give you a 100. Way to go! ! Thanks so much for posting this. It just made my day. Check out my poems. Love ya, Tiff.

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