Cloud Land Mist Prison Banks Poem by Terence George Craddock

Cloud Land Mist Prison Banks

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time passes minutes hours sun above clouds shining
above cast down ground cloud land mist prison banks
slow wind breeze soft blows or sun mist fog burning

Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Tuesday, January 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud,nature,nature love,sun,time,timeless
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.
Split image from the poem 'The Sun Miracle Time Remakes Mist World Fog' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
Written in February 2017 on the 1.2.2017.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 01 February 2017

Terry your writing is prolific at the moment I can't keep up lol... but nicely penned. Annette

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Terry Craddock 01 February 2017

short simple poems due to lack of time, but short simple has instant appeal if well written, longer poems take time to layered season, to send roots deep into our psyche

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