Closed Poem by Country Girl

Closed

Rating: 1.5


open your eyes
see past the lies

open your mind
leave the past behind

open your heart
we don't have to be apart

(this poem is not yet completed)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 30 July 2008

We always hurt the ones we love for some unknown reason or other. While this isn't complete, it is still emotional, and very true. Can't wait to read the whole piece. Barbara

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Rosemary Dupree 16 November 2007

Not yet completed but a wonderful start. Rosemary

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