Clicking Moments Poem by Stefan nnn

Clicking Moments

Rating: 4.7


clicking moments
listlessly away
days escape like loosely held sand
the road less travelled seems lost
in this dense fog of ennui

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raynette Eitel 04 June 2005

Stefan, to me the 'clicking moments' image doesn't go with 'days escape like loosely held sand' which by the way, it a nice image. When I first went to this poem, I thought it might be about taking pictures. I really like 'dense fog of ennui.' You have lovely images in your head. Raynette

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