Clear Sky~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Clear Sky~

Rating: 4.1


All of the clouds have vanished,
and the I am crystal clear;
what brought them up?
They traveled a long distance to cover me!
They might have caught a glimpse of me from afar.
When they gathered together,
they realized my vastness by reaching up
Were they aware of my son (sun) ,
daughter (moon) , and little ones (stars) ,
as well as my angry brother (lightning) ?

O' now they talk about back journey
Sure, they will return to earth
their rightful place- in pieces
giving joy to the receiver - as rain
bringing joy to those who receive them,
but neither they nor I will reveal this secret.

Saturday, May 13, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical,sky,cloud
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 May 2023

Asim you left me breathless on this one Bravo!

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M. Asim Nehal 14 May 2023

I am happy you liked it. Thanks much LeeAnn.

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Richard Wlodarski 15 May 2023

Brilliance beyond the gloomy clouds!

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Bharati Nayak 14 May 2023

A philosophical poem with great depth.Clouds can not cover up the sky, how hard it may try.Truth is like the vast sky and it is a powerhouse as sun, moon and stars are on its side.

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David Wood 14 May 2023

Beautifully put, it is amazing that everything, including us, and made from the same molecules in different amounts.

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Anjandev Roy 14 May 2023

Simply outstanding.....thanks for sharing.....

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M. Asim Nehal 14 May 2023

Thanks to all those who rated my poem without leaving comments.

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