Clear As Glass Poem by Khalilah Bain Mackey

Clear As Glass

Rating: 3.5


'Beautiful', to me, clear as glass, as I look up at you, I hope that this won't pass. This feeling of 'warmth' upon my skin, 'soft' and light, won't you let me in. Glide along, as easy as can be, taking perfect from, is what my eyes see. 'Listen' to hear, 'not even' one sound,
'perfect' you are 'perfect' I've found. 'Beautiful' to me, 'clear as glass', don't change one thing, thats all I ask.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 26 December 2015

Very Profound, Simply stating that perfection needs no improvements.

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Romeo Della Valle 24 April 2011

A very thoughtful and poignant write! You got the talent to make through the Poetry World! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Juan Guzman 23 May 2010

writen with emotion and creativity, but i think it could be a little more original, like another line or something ffrom me a 7-8 out of 10

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Kieran J96 19 May 2010

really well done on this poem. it is awsome.

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