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Taylor Marsh
(2/27/2009 8:57:00 PM) |
you just wrote your heart out in this poem! ...that was very sweet ten, ten ten! ! ! !
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C. P. Sharma
(2/25/2009 10:05:00 PM) |
Sweet outpouring of sincere emotions.
CP
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Bill Thomas
(1/30/2009 2:46:00 PM) |
Wow. Raw, passionate, emotion as it should be: you leave much untold, but just enough to make the poem tantalisingly right.
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Claudiu Cancea
(12/17/2008 8:19:00 PM) |
Honey i'm wonder that some of your poems are actions of your life, and i trully believe is so, and sometimes i guess it make you comfortable to have that relief here, these poem is more about you, i like the end part, I love him
Think about how much
I die
Inside
that show very close dedication to your soulmate.
keep going.
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Edwin Baldwin
(12/15/2008 1:53:00 PM) |
some people just give love a bad name.....10
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Sebastine Humaemo
(12/14/2008 12:08:00 AM) |
becca.....this poem comes under your best list....i specially like the last two lines.................much touching and true.......sebastine.....
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Egi David Perdana
(11/1/2008 9:47:00 PM) |
wow is purely different, it's very unusual sense, good! !
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
(11/1/2008 6:18:00 AM) |
Not blame me for choosing him,
Who routinely stalks my livingl drreams,
If my heart always cries for him,
Do you think is it my fault or sin.
Good poem full of emotions:
Dr Hitesh C Sheth
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