Children Gift Compassion Wisdom Into Our Lives Poem by Terence George Craddock

Children Gift Compassion Wisdom Into Our Lives

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our children gift
give depth in dimensional
meaning in our lives

our love for our children
carries into ripples circles
embracing their life interactions

echoes hopes
dreams achievements
enriching anchouring

our present future interactions
our empathy for all children families
and their opportunities quality of life

the way truth light
is such a cool name
make this name

special for all the right reasons
let our lives be seeds wisdom blossoms
flowers scent gardens in paradise

sow peace harmony blessing seeds
gift enlightenment into disharmony shards
hands radiating love tame savage beasts


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Wednesday, May 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: children,compassion,families,lifestyle,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Original version of the split images 'Children Bless With Fresh Perspectives' and 'Sow Peace Harmony Blessing Seeds' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
Written in May 2016 on the 16&19.5.2016.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 23 May 2016

I also liked the penultimate stanza, the first extant stanza where I used flower seed imagery would be the final stanza od 'Snowpower' back in November 81. Adults living a second childhood through their children is a beautiful motif and experience, my father's mother called me Old Top when I was a few years old because she said I had walked this world before, an incredibly gifted wise giving women who played around eight musical instruments. Some get to live their first childhood with their children :)

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Mihaela Pirjol 20 May 2016

I read somewhere that: ' through their children, adults live a second childhood'. Your poem resonates with that statement. I especially enjoyed the penultimate stanza - really poetic.

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