Child's Sleep Complaint (The Moonlight Serenade) Poem by Chuck Audette

Child's Sleep Complaint (The Moonlight Serenade)

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the moon
seems very loud
tonight
I need a cloud
to put out the light

Chuck Audette
Monday, January 2, 2006
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Stewart Mckenzie 03 January 2006

They say that poets are seven times as likely to be synaesthetic I wonder if synaesthetes are seven times as likely to be poets

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Linda Hepner 04 January 2006

You have caught the purity of a child before they are messed up with imposed language!

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Mary Nagy 10 January 2006

A beautiful image! Sincerely, Mary

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Elya Thorn 26 January 2006

Beautiful, great metaphores! Elya Thorn

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Lea Simpson 27 February 2006

Chuck, Chuck, Chuck. Shit hot, as ever.

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Alison Cassidy 09 January 2008

Gentle little epigram. I agree with Ez, it certainly could have been written by Spike. The sky is full of holes to let the rain in but the holes are very small that's why rain is thin. Clever lad. I love it. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Careful with that dogma, my karma might hit it . 06 November 2006

Great. Don't know why but it reminded me of Spike Milligan. Ez

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Jerzegirl *~~ 10 June 2006

still one of my favorites............................

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Dee Daffodil 01 May 2006

Chuck, Awwww....this one was sweet, very touching. Hugs, Dee

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R H 13 April 2006

Sweet and simple, I love this! Warm wishes, Justine.

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