Cheer-Up Cheerily (A Riddle To Solve) Poem by Rob Lamberton

Cheer-Up Cheerily (A Riddle To Solve)

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I saw you in my backyard
My eyes were fixed on your warm sunny breast
Early as you tugged strings from from the moist tanned ground
I saw you in my back yard
Late signing as you retreated to the trees year-round
Did I hear a lilting whistle near the honeysuckle
I saw you in my backyard
My eyes were fixed on your warm sunny breast

Wednesday, February 1, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: riddle poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 February 2023

I enjoyed the poem's lovely imagery. My favorite lines were: 'I saw you in my back yard Late signing as you retreated to the trees year-round Did I hear a lilting whistle near the honeysuckle' Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful gem..

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Rob Lamberton 08 February 2023

Evelyn, I'm honored by your visiting my poems and your thoughtfulness in considering them.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 February 2023

The stunning images, recurring and brilliant lines and wonderful poetic expressions make this poem magnificent. Beautifully crafted.

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Rob Lamberton 01 February 2023

Rose Marie, your comments are always so encouraging and beautifully expressed! I'm most appreciative.

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