Character Versus Pretence Poem by John Sensele

Character Versus Pretence



Character lies beneath your skin
Pretence shines on your surface
Character never is a mannequin
Success and progress bless your face.

Character lies beyond pretence
Pretence yield nothing of value
Character never is an offence
Success and progress inhabit a loo or an igloo.

Character lies beyond skies
Pretence embraces dour defences
Character never devours pesky pies
Success and progress loathe offences.

Character lies deeper than face value
Pretence conceals lies
Character offers anyone a value clue
Success and progress share strong ties.

Thursday, January 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 06 December 2019

favorite line so far (for its meaning & cleverness, not its structure) : " Success and progress inhabit a loo or an igloo." i've never been in an igloo, ....but....i've eaten an Eskimo Pie! ** ** " Eskimo Pie is a brand name for a chocolate-covered vanilla ice cream bar" Hey, i had NOT even gotten to YOUR POEM'S " pies" ! ! ! Honest; i DO have character. :) stanza 2: i'd use " yields" bri ;)

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John Sensele

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Ndola, Zambia
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