Chained Up In Love Poem by Kevin Fisher

Chained Up In Love

Rating: 4.8


Chains all around me, its getting hard to move
They're twisting around my neck and I begin to choke
You are smiling and teasing me
You just stand there holding the key, laughing as if this was a joke
The chains get tighter
Your eyes glow brighter
Your starting to walk up to me closer and closer
You put your lips right near mine
I now know what I have to do
I kiss you as the chains loosen
The chains dropp to the floor
I hold you in my arms and kiss you even more
I tell her that she's beautiful
I love her
And I was chained up in her love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Damn! ....that's beautiful my kind of love! hehe... +10

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;) hehehe! ... i like that! thanks for sharing, +10

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fasntastic can u comment my poems? thanks

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win_it143 (*_*) 23 April 2009

hahhahahaa nice one..........................

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Xiaowei Shi 25 April 2009

feeling of love........

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Latasha Hall 24 September 2009

so, explain this one to me... You were chained up in her love, so you get her to fall in love with you, so maybe now she's chained up in your love? And you still love her? Most guys flee from that kind of love, but i really like this poem. 10++++

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i like it :) 10 4 u! !

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This was nice....I feel chained in luv at times 2 DIMPLzZ

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wendy Rodriguez 07 June 2009

cute poem! ! ! it is always nice to have some inspiration

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Christina Phan 12 May 2009

niceeee lol gd one funnny 10+ fanastic one

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