Treasure Island

Kevin Fisher

(8/28/90 / Canton, Ohio)

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As Darkness Consumes You


Everyone is born so innocent
As your body ages your darkness raises
Your good is gone and you begin to try to repent
Repent for all your past sins
You learn there is no god to forgive you
You try to escape your darkness
But it hits you like a thousand sharp pins
Darkness surrounds your heart
Turns your mind and soul black
You remember the saying within every bit of darkness there is a light
All I see is eternal night
This is a curse that you can never fight
You can't go back
Your light is gone forever
Like myself you will begin to enjoy this
As darkness consumes you

Submitted: Tuesday, March 03, 2009
Edited: Thursday, September 29, 2011

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  • Lyn Paul (10/7/2013 12:04:00 AM)

    I hope some where in your eternal night you will see a beautiful star directing you to life. Do hang on for your powerful words will heal so many (Report) Reply

  • Besa Dede (10/7/2012 3:37:00 PM)

    Sad lines. Hope that you will distinguish soon that the Light is still there. Look closer and you will see it in the innocent laughter of the children, in the morning dew resting peacefully on the rose petals...
    Light never fails to disappoint, never goes away. Light is life! ! Think positive my fellow poet!
    Regards,
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Yelena M. (3/31/2009 6:07:00 AM)

    Those who walked in darkness have seen the brightest light if they wanted to see it. Anyway, you have shaped your poem very originally and only 10 for your work :)
    Best wishes.
    A. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Hale (3/5/2009 9:17:00 AM)

    just like all my sins r never forgiven baby so some people fel into hte hole we r ment to be (Report) Reply

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