Kevin Fisher

Rookie (8/28/90 / Canton, Ohio)

As Darkness Consumes You - Poem by Kevin Fisher

Everyone is born so innocent
As your body ages your darkness raises
Your good is gone and you begin to try to repent
Repent for all your past sins
You learn there is no god to forgive you
You try to escape your darkness
But it hits you like a thousand sharp pins
Darkness surrounds your heart
Turns your mind and soul black
You remember the saying within every bit of darkness there is a light
All I see is eternal night
This is a curse that you can never fight
You can't go back
Your light is gone forever
Like myself you will begin to enjoy this
As darkness consumes you


Comments about As Darkness Consumes You by Kevin Fisher

  • Gold Star - 5,686 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/6/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    Life can really tarnish a person's self-perception and world view..it is so difficult to remain pure in heart and spirit..very profound and insightful poem that is nicely written..congratulations on being Member of The Day..a ten.. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,538 Points Kay Staley (10/6/2014 11:14:00 AM)

    How depressing and wonderfully horrific. Good name that will draw the readers in. I wish it described more of what happenned to you after the darkness consumed you. Like the idea that the author enjoys the process of the consuming darkness. We must see to understand darkness. Understanding the darkness will allow us to choose if we want it...because if you want light, you have the power to choose light. Thought inspiring idea but the poem needs a bit of works. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,036 Points Savita Tyagi (10/6/2014 11:08:00 AM)

    Darkness can consume us at any age. It is sad when it affects youth. This is the age to learn to fight darkness and not to loose hope. Learn to fight and you will not be consumed by it even when you age. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 341 Points Briony Nicholls (10/6/2014 7:04:00 AM)

    Precocious and engaging at first but it soon sounds like something a young person would write with no experience in growing old but trying so hard to imagine being old & miserable... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 940 Points Leslie Philibert (10/6/2014 4:40:00 AM)

    Like this too, think though (my POV) that needs more details to make it more poignant and transport more emotions. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,358 Points Lyn Paul (10/6/2014 3:47:00 AM)

    Hello Kevin again super poem of day which I read over a year ago. Well done and hope all is well (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,358 Points Lyn Paul (10/7/2013 12:04:00 AM)

    I hope some where in your eternal night you will see a beautiful star directing you to life. Do hang on for your powerful words will heal so many (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sridatta Gupta (10/7/2012 10:43:00 PM)

    The mysticism is worth an applaud (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Besa Dede (10/7/2012 3:37:00 PM)

    Sad lines. Hope that you will distinguish soon that the Light is still there. Look closer and you will see it in the innocent laughter of the children, in the morning dew resting peacefully on the rose petals...
    Light never fails to disappoint, never goes away. Light is life! ! Think positive my fellow poet!
    Regards,
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Blossom Mist (10/6/2012 11:55:00 AM)

    Awesome Lines! ! ! i'm speechless (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zealous White (10/6/2012 10:24:00 AM)

    Pure sense. Am innocently born but the world deceived me, trying to repent all day. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,706 Points Godfrey Morris (10/6/2012 6:18:00 AM)

    Lovely and powerful write. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,706 Points Godfrey Morris (10/6/2012 6:18:00 AM)

    Lovely and powerful write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Adam Pinheiro (10/2/2009 7:16:00 PM)

    I'm speechless, amazing write, and its so easy to relate to.10/10. A new favorite ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (3/31/2009 6:07:00 AM)

    Those who walked in darkness have seen the brightest light if they wanted to see it. Anyway, you have shaped your poem very originally and only 10 for your work :)
    Best wishes.
    A. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aisha Love (3/16/2009 4:11:00 PM)

    wow the bottom two lines kind of scared me lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie name less (3/12/2009 4:58:00 PM)

    there is a god to forgive you!
    you just haven't found him yet! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie name less (3/12/2009 4:58:00 PM)

    there is a god to forgive you!
    you just haven't found him yet! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pandora Chaos (3/12/2009 2:04:00 PM)

    Thats so true! i would know (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hazel Hale (3/5/2009 9:17:00 AM)

    just like all my sins r never forgiven baby so some people fel into hte hole we r ment to be (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 29, 2011


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