Caving In Poem by Wandering Scarlet

Caving In

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My support bar is collapsing,
fading away,
how will i stand,
how hard will i fall,
how will i survive,
my foundation is collapsing,
i'm crumbling to pieces
without my support,
i cannot exist,
when will I be able to relax
not being parenoyed,
about falling
about crumbling
shattering
..................
ceasing to exist.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Blake 30 March 2007

i feel the exact same way love the poem! !

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Format is good espically talented. Keep on writing

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'wow! ' is all i can say

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 April 2007

This is something like a small slide show, giving every step of the caving in. Good.

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Roben Reid 02 April 2007

all I have to say is... deep

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Madly In Love 31 March 2007

Don't we all feel that way sometimes? good poem

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