Caution! Frequent Stops Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Caution! Frequent Stops

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Please do not approach me and keep a safe distance my dear.
Do not rely on my broken wheels.
This nagging engine is too old for the slippery road.
Please overtake me and I have no any regrets.
My horn is weak as same as the brakes
And I wish you a happy and a safe journey!

[ Lord Jesus also suggested, ' When it seems to you that your suffering exceeds your strength, contemplate my wounds.' (Diary 1184,1152)

* A merry X'mas and seasonal greetings to all my poet friends!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 19 December 2008

Very original wishes for the New Year. Excellent use of metaphor. Always your friend, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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