Caught In The Rain Poem by Jeanette Telusma

Caught In The Rain

Rating: 5.0


My dream was finally becoming a reality
Without having to plan it.
The perfect opportunity was present.
I looked up and opened my arms.
It was raining hard.
A dream come true.
My hair was perfect.
Dressed for an outing.
Crossed body purse and all.
It rained as if there was no tomorrow.
Such a joy, a moment filled with peace.
A needed refresher to my soul.
I walked a mile and back.
No need to rush.
This was my moment to smell the roses.
This was a personal moment between me and God.
I envisioned He was there with me.
It was a wonderful time to let go
Of any cumbersome thing.
That day I felt as an eagle soaring high.
Breaking through what holds the mind takes courage.
What an exhilarating feeling it was?
I promise myself this would not be my last.

Caught In The Rain
Friday, August 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: courage,rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
White Tiger 09 February 2018

Hi Jeanette, Excellent poem filled with emotion. I felt the rain comfortably splashing on me. I felt the freedom and I felt the softness of Gods eyes looking down as I felt every raindrop. A well deserved 10+++

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Luo Zhihai 21 December 2020

It was raining hard. A dream come true. My hair was perfect. Dream, rain and true life! I hope we are happy! A wonderful poem!

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Sochukwu Ivye 14 June 2020

Such fresh and sweet lines. Do more, poetess.

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Jeanette Telusma 29 November 2020

Thank you so much < 3 smiling.... blessings to you always!

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Sarah Shahzad 12 December 2019

A nice rhyming poem with a smooth flow and lovely imagery! I love to write as well, have my own poetry, so please check my site too :)

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Jeanette Telusma 29 November 2020

Thank you so much.... blessings always. I shall, thank you for the invite!

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Prabir Gayen 01 January 2019

Fantastic poem dear poetess... awesome diction.... Thanks...........

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Jeanette Telusma 05 January 2019

Thanks, Prabir for your time. Blessings..

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Irfanulla Shariff 02 August 2018

Amazing lyrics filled with heartfelt emotions. Brilliantly penned, Jeanette. Thanks for sharing.

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Jeanette Telusma 21 October 2018

And thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts, Irfanulla. Thank you! ! !

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