Castle On My Sea Of Sin's Poem by Ashley burnam

Castle On My Sea Of Sin's

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Looking upon a cloaded Castle
over the sea's of my sins
I can still see you.

Stuck in the world you made for yourself.
With all the cutting
and the crying you do
All because you feel sorry for yourself.

When I look at you i wanna scream
And not in agony.
You make me glad for all the things i have.
I just wish you could see.

When you write those poems
and reveal what you hide
I can't stay mad
until you say im no t worthy of you.

One of these days
i wont be able to love you for you
And that will be the day I learn
what the term I love you mean.

Its like a shackle on my heart
and it drags me down.
Please release me,
Let me be free.

And on the castle over my sea of sin's
the shadows dress me in silk and make me rest my head.

When im forgiven for everything i've done
I will be free.

I will rpent with you
and make you smile
and take your knife away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ron Flowers 22 August 2008

Ashley, you have much to say at your young age. Keep writing. Ron

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Bonnie Collins 30 May 2008

Ashley, This is really sad, and deep... I only wish kids today didnt have to use knives and cutting so much it is soo sad... Your work is very good and filled with alot of passion.... Bonnie

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