Caress Undercover- Haiku Poem by Rehan Hyder

Caress Undercover- Haiku

Rating: 4.7


geisha's feet
petals curl up to
touch her soles

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Marie Van Tassell 16 March 2008

Sweet and succinct... your eyes may see the beauty, but it's your heart that pens the glory. I love the innocent sensuality of Caress Undercover.

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Orange Geometry 30 May 2008

I remember the ashen look on your face when tinywords didn't publish it

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Flora Gillingham 08 April 2008

What Linda says is absolutely right. there is an innocent sensuality in this perfect piece. F

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 29 March 2008

lol! ! ! ...i had no idea what i had wrtten was profound enuf to evince such a soul wrenching response! ..at the risk of self-depreciation i would like to say..that poem was smply inspired by a frends callous proclamaton that im wicked...its an explanation of why, and on what terms i can accept that sort of criticism.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 28 March 2008

pretty. appreciate your feedback. ..could you perhaps explain to me what you meant by your comments about'wicked'

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Indira Babbellapati 24 March 2008

isn't that a very sensuous visual!

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