Captive Queen, Cast In Velvet And In Steel (9) Poem by Captain Cur

Captive Queen, Cast In Velvet And In Steel (9)



By all the mercies fate has stamped its seal
And cast thy heart in velvet and in steel;
In velvet then both softness and delight,
In steel thy raised sword gleaming in the light,
For both are as one, though dissimilar
Crafted in excellence to touch and shield.
Thy spirit's flame imbued in thee at birth
A beacon to guide this wayward earth,
If then to ask what difference can thou make
Look! Mountains tremble and the earth does quake.
Days of war have been brought down upon us
Our bones and blood spur our horses rush
Thy hair streaming in continuous air
In waves of pageantry, in waves of fear!

Tuesday, January 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: queen,war,leadership,captivity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Captive Queen" is a multi-part poetic story written in iambic pentameter. It chronicles the story of a Queen usurped from power and held prisoner, a prisoner of both love and fate. The poem is comprised of letters written to her by her hopeful lover and dutiful Knight who attempts to free his Queen and restore her Kingdom to its former glory.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
just me 28 January 2020

Cap'n Cur my swarthy friend, please write my epitaph in the end!

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Captain Cur 28 January 2020

Just me, I would be proud to write your epitaph However, I do not wish you to end, Hence I find myself at odds with my pen. So all in  good nature just for a laugh I will write you this tribute, but hope you don't pass.

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Rini shibu 28 January 2020

Excellent write and nice flow captain

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Captain Cur 29 January 2020

Thank you so much Rini, for reading and commenting.

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