Captain's Journey Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Captain's Journey

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Adorned with
Lovely people
Full of life
Full of noise
and commotion
The huge ship
Started
Its thrilling journey
Thru unknown path
Lead by the proud captain.
Tides and waves
kept hitting and
drifting the ship
But
voyage continued
With hurdles.
All of a sudden the storm
Stood on its path
But It crossed
All obstacles.

Captains
presence of mind
Overtook all hurdles
that
What ever may come
He was ever ready for it.


Captain lead the
Ship to its destination.
Few of them got down
Some of them boarded
For next destination.
Captains journey
Continued with
Old and new
Passengers
and kept on continuing...
Till his destination was reached.

Life is nothing but a journey
Hurdles are the challenges
Each challenges
Make us strong.
Don't know when the
Twist and turns come
All of a sudden
Changes your complete
Journey on its
Way to destination.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Friday, June 7, 2013
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 25 August 2014

Yes life is a journey, we have to sail through, come what may we have to reach our destination with God as the Captain..............Geetha......very well crafted

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Shahzia Batool 02 September 2013

Geetha, it reminded me of Departure and Arrival by the great T.S.Eliot, with a lil bit change in theme but for a wonderful imagery... no worries for the unknown path, hurdles, tides and waves hitting, if the Captain is capable and wonderful leader! ! !

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Jaya Kumar 07 June 2013

This is very good and I ahve enjoyed reading your poem

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