Can You? Poem by Sahar Sahar

Can You?

Rating: 4.3


Can you,
Undo,
what you have done, ,
with me,
When you deserted me,
In the middle of burning desert,
When i was asked,
to walk bare foot,
on burning coal,
to prove,
my sinless person,
To prove my innocence,
To unbdo,
Your sins.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asma Khan 03 September 2009

In a short poem deep emotions are penned. Great!

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 03 September 2009

a deep poem! in few lines you could show your feelings. I loved the description.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2009

my sinless person, To prove my innocence, To unbdo, Your sins..what a pain and anguish inthe poem. i am stunned to note all the sufferings under gone by individual to prove the hoesty.... well done and keep hw work up.....10 read mien no to violence... step mother and forgiveness

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ata khan 03 September 2009

Nice short poem, says a lot. thanks for sharing

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Black & White Right 03 September 2009

I loved every line of this piece. Thank you...

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