Can U Guess It? Poem by angel lockheart

Can U Guess It?

Rating: 2.4


Illuminating the world around us,
Flowing from being to mortal,
Surging out of the center of time,
Tying spirits together,
Streaming through keyholes,
Pouring out the music of eternity,
Painting the magnificent rainbows in heaven,
Lighting the miraculous flame within hearts,
Beating the unstoppable rhythm of life,
Leaving nothing in its wake,
Except,
Bitter sw33tness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 11 November 2008

Painting the magnificent rainbows in heaven, great line. I like all the metaphors. good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Chocolate Bunny 07 November 2008

Good one. I really enjoyed it. It was like the words flew off the page.

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its, ahhhhhh, , , totaly you, beauty!

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