Broken Poem by angel lockheart

Broken

Rating: 2.5


To many times I’ve been hurt,
To many times I’ve been blamed,
To many times my heart has been shattered,
Into so many pieces that I’m afraid,
When I opened my heart
And let you come in
You tore the fragments to useless shreds
And I’m scared that for it ever mend
And be strong enough to hold back together again,
I'll need a love full of unbreakable threads
But even then,
I’ll never be able to place the jagged shards back together right,
And the pieces will crumble into so many parts
That it’ll be like ashes
Left from a fire
That’ll never go out.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Short and powerful, , BEAUTY! edzacly the rite combernation..great job.

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Dark Gurl 55 22 January 2009

nicely written poem hun..lol i like it good job..

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Blue Eyes 13 November 2008

wow, it is so romantic, i even felt a tear in my eye

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*Trusting You* 11 November 2008

That it’ll be like ashes Left from a fire That’ll never go out. I really like those lines. good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Aijaz Asif 18 September 2008

quite explicit, short and beautifuly written...the title reminded me one of my poem 'broken heart'....thanks

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(: God's Wild Child :) 29 July 2008

very deep, i like it. but never give up. u wont like where it takes u. im not even kidding.

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