I thought I heard your voice
somewhere in the wind...
I followed it by choice
until its calling thinned.
When completely dissapeared
'twas nothing left to hear,
I turned around in dread
crying many silent tear.
Clairaudience [poets are so] nicely used metaphorically… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Sally Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Very well written. If you have never been there, you will think it is a nice collection of words
mrs plumb plumb... this expresses exactly how i feel....: (
Sally: The thought behind this was intrigueing. I liked it, try mine -Lies. Adeline
this was very beutiful indeed. i felt the longing and hurt in the poem.
Very beautifully written, Sally, the rhyming I found to be outstanding as well as the flow of the poem. Good Work. A 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Who is this one calling? ? ? Looking at the poem and how you wrote it, you expressed and imparted to the poem the full emotion/expression which you had when you wrote the poem. very well penned.