Caged Hope Poem by hassan hayati
Caged Hope
Two love birds, sitting sad in the cage
Viewing the life on every single page
They are all the same for the one in jail
But they try to see the worlds and freedom, even pale
Stared at the mate, and as if telling him with hope
Close your eyes open your wings, with me you cope
Sneered the other and clapped his wings, jumped a bit high
I wish we were crows, cacophonous but free in the sky
Able to pick some seeds on harvesting land
On a branch we sit, on the very tip of a cliff we stand
Looking at all leaves dancing for the wind force
And drinking from the streams without a blink of course
Making a nest in the spring with the sticks
So early we catch the worms for our feather less chicks
And flying in groups while it is the time to migrate
Taking care of the younger ones, not remain or be late
She looked and sighed and did repine
Went on murmuring her voice full of pain
But these are all fancy and dreams my dear and nice
For our color and voice we have paid a big price
Said the other with happiness and love with his voice long
Freedom is non for me, if you are not along
I will never leave you my beloved kind
Even if the cage is broken into pieces, I stay, you never mind
For the other it was enough to hear a word so warm
Rubbed her shoulder to his, so proud of his glory and charm
Life is so short, let's make it a bit wide
Promise to diffuse love from your side
Hassan - Hayati
A touching poem, life of a a couple of birds in a cage so nicely described.
Sepas, sir Jawad You are always encouraging me, by your comments. Thanks.
What a beauty in poetry! Beautiful imaginative scripting. Loved it
A striking title and a lovely poem on love and companionship. Warm regards, Bipasha
Wonderful imaginary and imagery. A touching pictue of life without freedom has been so nicely and vividly portrayed. Secrifice of lover has been too painted intensely. I like to quote here.... I will never leave you my beloved kind Even if the cage is broken into pieces, I stay, you never mind.. Thanks. Full vote.
thank you so much for your comments that makes me encouraged to be like you in the future.
What a touching poem of two hearts, the lesson, the meaning, the narrative style and story are wonderful...its so lovely to see how each other supporting together living in same situation by exchanging hopes and loves. So much things going here that make me appreciate your work..lovely one!
I am happy that you like this poem. thanks for the comment, hope this piece really deserve it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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hey try to see the worlds and freedom, even pale Close your eyes open your wings, Making a nest in the spring with the sticks She looked and sighed and did repine fancy and dreams Even if the cage is broken into pieces, I stay, you never mind These are the points which i collected from your poem after reading it carefully.. Thank you very much for this poem. Very great imagination and you use it as symbols of never failing love. Thank you
thanks and appreciate your attention. I am encouraged.