C + H2o = We Poem by Alice Kriel

C + H2o = We



light dances on river,
a moving marvel
sun and water make rainbow,
a beautiful illusion
like our love:
moving from a distance
yet we never touch
deeper than the surface

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 25 February 2006

I sense frustrated feelings of love in this poem, Alice. The feelings are there but don't know or aren't able to take root and grow more deeply. Delightful images. Warm regards, Gina.

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Alice Kriel

Alice Kriel

Douglas, South Africa; Currently in UK
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