By The Side Of Love Poem by Florida Angel

Florida Angel

Florida Angel

Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach

By The Side Of Love



On bed sleeping
On Bed Loving
On bed the greatest fulfillments

Hands Held together until asleep
Hands Held on the first hours of the day
Hands Held when his site awakes her eyes

Heart beating guarding her dreams
Heart beating love words love you
Heart beating to never leave

Empty side of the bed
Empty heart in love
Empty memories of a dream.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Hesham 01 September 2007

A skilful depiction of two contradicting moments—those of fullness and emptiness, of presence and absence, of love and loss. The brevity of the poem intensifies the tension of the transition from one moment to the other, and the burdens of the journey between them.

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x... x... 01 September 2007

Well, this is another wonder, most especially the last three lines: EMPTY SIDE OF THE BED EMPTY HEART IN LOVE EMPTY MEMORIES OF A DREAM.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! you took the words [that i couldn't put in words] right out of my mouth..[sorry Meatloaf, but did love that song] Well, if nothing else, one side of the temp-pedic will have a 40 instead of 20 year warrenty..~~~~~~~~~~~~love this Karina. ~~~~~~just me.x~~~~~~~~

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Florida Angel

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Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach
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