But Up) Poem by Doc PenPen B. Takipsilim
But Up)
GO where i fall in midst of mist
of why TO be or not to be so many why why me
im in the PLACE of hundreds thousands lists twist to exist
in drowning mud of floating coffins im mad NO light i see
loved ones all gone im down so down and all i HAVE my fists
kissing my knees flaming-in-midst-of-i of fallen-i-in-mist dried-i go where: (I
26-Sep-09, 'Ondoy Struck The Philippines'
Hi penpen, I'm one of the fans of yours. I've read your poems at emanila. I love your poems especially 'the hard truth' and 'gestalt II'...they were all UNIQUE and INCOMPARABLE! ! ! So sad, I can't find it anymore when i revisited the site? ! I'm happy i'd made a copy. How come you only have one poem here? This one affix your signature, you have a very UNUSUAL STYLE. I like this...where will I GO when I'm so down? I have to read it upwards? ! ...I HAVE NO PLACE TO GO...! ! ! VERY INTELLECTUAL! ! ! VERY INSPIRATIONAL! ! !
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I would like to translate this poem
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My dear friend, WISDOM is not a privilege but a virtue granted to us by our creator to be shared with the rest of humanity....Obviously, you have shown to me and the entire world of your great talent which I hope you will keep it up...You have plenty to show and do not be afraid, you are you and the one and only...let the music play! Thanks very much for your valuable comments, I highly appreciate them...10++++, God Bless You! , Love and Peace, Romeo