Burden Of Youth Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

Burden Of Youth

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The Burden of youth

She was seventeen, and her boyfriend had left her
Life is more intense when you are young she wanted to commit
Suicide so he could see how much he loved her.
Filled her rucksack with stones and waded into the bay, but
The water was low only to her chest when she reached the other
Side she was glad to be alive.
She met a young man also unlucky in love he took her rucksack
Filled more stones into it and waded into the sea, but now there was
High tide the young man disappeared under the sea.

A few seagulls shrieked otherwise silence as the girl waited for the bus
To take her back to town, block out unpleasant thoughts she said aloud.
My father is a communist, the bus driver who was a fascist stopped
Pulled out his gun and shot her dead and women on an outing clapped.
This as her father was letting the red flag fly in the street of Utopia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 12 November 2016

This is a very said story. But how would I sacrifice my own life to show that I love someone - when I am not even sure that i'll see his reaction after committing suicide. And still being not sure even if she will notice my absence. Thank you man for sharing, this sad poem.

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